{Review} The Debra Dilemma by Katie Graykowski

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{Review} The Debra Dilemma by Katie GraykowskiThe Debra Dilemma by Katie Graykowski
Series: The Lone Stars #4
Publisher: Self-Published on August 31, 2015
Genre(s): Contemporary Romance (Adult)
Pages: 272

Our Rating

1.5 Stars

Debra Covington is finally getting her life together. She’s spent the last ten years making Warren Daniver pay for choosing a million dollars over her. Her plan of sport-dating the entire football team that Daniver owns has backfired and the only one she’s hurting is herself. Now, she works at Safe Place helping victims of domestic violence.

Warren Daniver has a problem. Debra Covington is no longer making his life a living hell and now, he can’t stop thinking about her. Ten years ago, he took her father’s money to keep from ruining her life. Warren has regretted taking the money every minute since he cashed that check. It’s time he told her the truth…only she refuses to see him.

The harder Warren tries to insinuate himself into Debra’s life, the harder she resists him. Their mental tug-of-war comes to a head when Warren learns that when he left all of those years ago, Debra was pregnant.

Can she ever forgive him? Can he forgive himself? Warren will stop at nothing to finally solve, The Debra Dilemma.



This book includes mature subject matter that may not be appropriate for readers under the age of 18.

TheVerdictI had high hopes when I first started this book, since within just a few pages I’d come to really like a character that I hated in the previous books.  That’s a difficult feat, especially in so short a span, so I was surprised when the story quickly started going downhill for me.

Debra was the groupie we all abhorred, always throwing herself at any available (and often unavailable) player on the Lone Stars team.  There was nothing at all to like about her, and the way she tried to take credit for Chord’s birthday party in Saving Grace pretty much ruined her in my eyes.  But as it turns out, she has a pretty heartbreaking backstory, and her sleeping her way through the team was a misguided attempt at revenge against Warren, the man who broke her heart years ago.

Debra was the rich kid, and Warren was the help, and as in any good fairy tale, they fell in love.  But Debra got pregnant, her truly horrible dad found out, and Warren was paid a million dollars to disappear from her life.  Some nine months later, Debra was completely on her own when her newborn son died right after birth, and she’s been out to make Warren miserable ever since.  I can’t say I blame her.

There’s more to the story, though, and while Warren certainly didn’t make the best decision back then, it wasn’t quite the betrayal that Debra thougt it was.  And now that Debra’s starting to regain her sense of self and let go of her degrading revenge plan, Warren’s doing his damnedest to win her back.  Unfortunately, his plan includes stalking, setting her kitchen on fire, and nearly killing her with a kiss.

For a short while, I could get behind the couple, and while I didn’t necessarily agree with the way Warren was relentlessly following Debra, I could understand his desperation.  But where the other books in this series have been mostly lighthearted and funny, The Debra Dilemma was all angst and regret.  Warren’s bumbling and disastrous attempts to impress Debra weren’t quite the comedic lift the story needed, and the more I read, the more of a buzzkill it became.

Now I’ll be the first to say that this series doesn’t stay mired in realism, which is often a good thing when it comes to romance.  I mean, we want to read a happily ever after story in which everything works out, not a dissertation on dirty laundry, morning breath, and the harsh realities of life.  But after ten years of punishing Warren for deserting her, Debra forgives him in roughly 3.7 seconds.  Yes, he was sorry, and yes, he didn’t have the full story when he left, but there’s just no way to put all that past behind them so quickly.  And just to pile on the unbelievability, every football player on the team drops everything at a moment’s notice, all the girls immediately love Debra, and everyone’s holding hands and singing Kumbaya.  Okay, so they weren’t singing, but at least if they had been, I could have chalked it up to a religious awakening.

Where it really went off the tracks, though, was near the end.  Once Debra and Warren were on the path to happily ever after, there was simply too much book left unwritten, and so the pages were filled with over-the-top good deeds, demonstrations of Debra’s unrealistic wealth, and so many feel-good moments that I found myself skipping through most of the rest of the story.  In the end, The Debra Dilemma is a terrible departure from an otherwise entertaining series, and I have to say that I really wish it had been skipped altogether.  I have no idea why I bothered finishing it.

  
The Breakdown
Cover Design
4 star rating
Plot & Pace
1 star rating
Characters
1 star rating
Style & Editing
1 star rating
Story Conclusion
star rating
Overall Rating 1 star rating
  

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About Katie Graykowski

Katie Graykowski likes sassy heroines, Mexican food, movies where lots of stuff gets blown up, and glitter nail polish.

She finished her first novel in the parking lot right before her first Romance Writers of America meeting. Since then, she’s finaled in or won almost every romance writing competition in the United States.

Katie has been married for over 19 years to a very loving, patient, and tolerant man. She has one human kid and three K-9 kids. She lives on a hilltop outside of Austin, Texas where her home office has an excellent view of the Texas Hill Country. When she’s not writing, she’s scuba diving.

 

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