{Review} The Moon Sisters by Therese Walsh


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{Review} The Moon Sisters by Therese WalshThe Moon Sisters by Therese Walsh
Publisher: Crown on March 4th, 2014
Genre(s): Coming of Age (NA)
Pages: 336

Our Rating

2 Stars

A beautiful coming-of-age novel about two sisters on a journey to forgive their troubled mother, with a sheen of almost-magical realism that overlays a story about the love of a family, and especially between sisters.

Therese Walsh's poignant and mesmerizing novel is a moving tale of family, love, and the power of stories. After their mother's probable suicide, sisters Olivia and Jazz are figuring out how to move on with their lives. Jazz, logical and forward-thinking, decides to get a new job, but spirited, strong-willed Olivia, who can see sounds, taste words, and smell sights, is determined to travel to the remote setting of their mother's unfinished novel to say her final goodbyes and lay their mother's spirit to rest.

Though they see things very differently, Jazz is forced by her sense of duty to help Olivia reach her goal. Bitter and frustrated by the attention heaped on her sunny sister whose world is so unique, Jazz is even more upset when they run into trouble along the way and Olivia latches to a worldly train-hopper. Though Hobbs warns Olivia that he's a thief who shouldn't be trusted, he agrees to help with their journey. As they near their destination, the tension builds between the two sisters, each hiding something from the other, and they will finally be forced to face everything between them and decide what is really important.

This book includes mature subject matter that may not be appropriate for readers under the age of 18.


Sigh. I wanted to like this book; it had a pretty cover and an interesting summary about loss and sister relationships. However, I was disappointed.

The book starts out with Olivia talking about the day her mother committed suicide. How she left her that day and how she found her later. Then it skips ahead about five months to Jazz’s point of view. Olivia is heading out on her own, to the bog her mother always wanted to visit, to spread their mother’s ashes. The problem is, Olivia has synesthesia, (which basically means her senses are a little backwards. She can see taste sounds and smell sights) and she is also legally blind, having burned out her retinas staring at the sun for months after her mother’s death (because the sun smelled like her mother).

Olivia is determined and their grandmother talks Jazz into accompanying her. The trip is full of troubles from the start, Jazz being pissed and Olivia doing as she pleases without thinking of the consequences. So desperate to get to the bog, Olivia hops a train and heads out with a group of hobos, when they have car trouble. Among these trainhoppers, is Hobbs; a thief covered in tattoos, which Olivia is almost immediately attracted to. He adds a bit of danger to the sisters’ adventure.

Jazz chases after her, but Olivia keeps pushing, keeps going forward. She needs to get to the bog no matter what. She needs to see the wisps that her mother wished to see.

The book goes back and for the between the sisters. Then also adds in letters the mother wrote. Each sister talks about their childhood and their relationship with their mother and the chapters go back and forth between the past and present day.

The idea was great and the writing was quite beautiful at times, especially in Olivia’s POV when she was talking about the sounds and tastes of different things.

Things I didn’t like? Well Jazz was a royal b****. I don’t usually like to call female characters b****** but seriously, she was a b****. She was downright cruel to Olivia and has no sympathy for her, and she was just mean and nasty towards everyone, even in the flashbacks. Jazz had a strained relationship with her mother (Beth); from what I could gather from the flashbacks, the Beth had postpartum depression, plus the fact that she had been disowned by her father. Beth wanted Jazz to make something of herself and attend college and get out of their small town that doesn’t even have a library. Jazz strongly resists and in unnecessarily rude ways.

I didn’t really like Olivia either; she was so childlike and strange. Plus what eighteen year old girl willingly blinds herself?! What kind of blind girl hops on a moving train?! No one seems to think it would be a good idea to get her counseling or some kind of help. Olivia was very close to Beth, having been home-schooled because of her synesthesia. She was the one that found her, and she carries the guilt that she left her mother alone that day.

The secondary characters had this whole history and this giant subplot that felt odd and it didn’t fit into the rest of the story. It could’ve been its own book, honestly. Plus there is insta-love between Olivia and Hobbs. At least on Olivia’s side. The secrets the sisters hold from each other are pretty big but the one Jazz is keeping only is really a secret once she finds out what Olivia’s is (basically, it was never really a intentionally kept secret, just more like a thing that was just never shared).

So, unfortunately I felt the book fell very flat and Jazz was way too mean for my liking.


About Therese Walsh

Therese's debut novel, The Last Will of Moira Leahy, was published in 2009 by Shaye Areheart books (Random House). Her second novel, The Moon Sisters, will be published by Crown (Penguin Random House) in March 2014.

Therese is the co-founder of Writer Unboxed, a blog for writers about the craft and business of fiction. Before turning to novels, she was a researcher and writer for Prevention magazine, and then a freelance writer. She’s had hundreds of articles on nutrition and fitness published in consumer magazines and online.

She has a master's degree in psychology.

Aside from writing, Therese’s favorite things include music, art, crab legs, Whose Line is it Anyway?, dark chocolate, photography, unique movies and novels, people watching, strong Irish tea, and spending time with her husband, two kids and their bouncy Jack Russell.

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